The Last to Have Sex

The Last to Have Sex

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2 336 mots (≈ 9 minutes)

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To put it simply, Jerome was fat. His only erogenous zone was his mouth.

But putting it simply didn't do justice to the rolls of flesh he carted around daily, the sheen of sweat that trickled from his pits, his forehead, his belly.

Putting it simply didn't do justice to Jerome, for though he was simple of mind and large of body, _he was_, for better or worse, a human being. And despite appearances, an evolved human being.

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SRDavis
SRDavis (2 livres)
25 février 2010 16:30

Very descriptive, the main character makes you feel simultaneous pity and disgust. The end left me feeling slightly disturbed - so job well done!


kaolin
kaolin (3 livres)
16 octobre 2009 08:18

I'd love to know what you think. This was an earlier piece of mine, and rough, but "sex" sure seems to be popular regardless. :)



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Langue: Anglais

Ecrit en: 2002

Publié: 2009-09-29

Nombre de mots: 2 336 mots (≈ 9 minutes)

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